Carth's feelings (SW KotOR fan scene)

This moment takes place when Carth Onasi, Bastila Shan and the main character (my girl's name is Mara Star) get to the Leviathan's bridge. I've always wanted Carth to say something romantic to my character before the final confrontation with his former mentor Saul Karath. So I made this picture with the game characters (I'm a terrible painter, yep so I used them)

"This door leads to the bridge," Carth whispered and looked at his companions. It's now or never.
"Lets do this," Mara activated her lightsaber.
"Yes, but... Before we go... Bastila, do me a favor?" Carth asked. "Please, turn away..."
"Why?" the Jedi wondered. But Carth didn't feel confused about his request. If they won't survive this battle, he wants to make sure that the woman he loves knows about his feelings for her. He told her this back on Manaan. The night they spent together was magic. Carth loves Mara and Mara loves him. But he can't face his main enemy until they talk. It was important to him.
"Turn away," Carth repeated, taking Mara's hand. "And... cover your ears. I need to speak with Mara. No jokes. Please."
"Okay..." Bastila muttered and turned away.
"So it finally came to this," Carth looked into Mara's eyes. 'You know, I would feel much better if you were somewhere safe... But here we are. And we face it together."
"As always," Mara nodded and smiled.
"I don't know if we survive this battle, but I want you to know, what I said back on Manaan was true... I love you. I love you, Mara Star, and always will. I'm not lying to you."
"I know. And I love you too, Carth," Mara said quietly. She deactivated her saber and then they kissed.
Bastila turned back and saw them kissing. She was shocked. "Why you two... Mara!" The other woman didn't reply. Bastila shook her head. "How can you... This is not the way of the Jedi..."
'I don't care,' said Mara's voice in Bastila's head.